OMG FINALLY SOME ART FOR SOMEBODY. This was a long, LONG overdo commission for *i-pandori, one day I was like, 'that's it, if I don't finish it soon, then I never will, so I'm gunna FINISH IT. ...So I did. And, sorry it took forever xD I'd had a lot of stress in daily life and had to take a break from art for others for a while.
She said to draw her succubus character as an animal, so I thought a fox would be the sexiest ;D
Hello, I am from #FeedbackPAW, and I am here to provide you with critique, helpful tips and hints, and also redlines/greenlines on this specific artwork.
This is a very well done piece, it looked like you put a lot of effort into this judging by the detail and how well the coloring and anatomy is done. The atmosphere works well with the sexy pose she has.
The only main issues I can really see here, well the one that stands out to me the most is the bright red highlights in the hair, in some areas it looks like it does not fit there or at least could had been toned down a little bit because the red is too intense, it would stand out like that mainly where a lot of the light had hit the hair. (which you got pretty correct mostly but I see that is is in certain areas that the light would not hit that much) the blush on her cheeks was a nice detail but I don't understand why there is a white highlight in it, since she has fur rather than a smooth surface, it would not give off that much of a shine. And the fur in the tail is a bit too chunky, maybe drawing some more individual strands, you want to balance out the clumpyness because fur does not just kind of stick together all the time, it tends to be thrown around everywhere with individual strands and some overlap. would had helped balance it out. And thats all I really see, I did not say much on the anatomy because it looks accurate, or at least from what I can see. Redlines and greenlines are optional and I will be more than happy to do one for you on request if you needed a visual description of what I just said. But this is a very well done picture. Very appealing.
I hope this was helpful. Thank you for submitting your lovely artwork to our group. We are looking forward to your submissions in the future. Have a great day! -*HellhoundHyena